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In some countries, girls and boys are educated in different schools rather than in the same school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

#countries #girls #boys #schools #school
There are still some countries which educate children separately
according to
 their genders. I would discuss an advantage
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 comfortable learning environment, meanwhile, the disadvantage is
lack
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 of confidence in having affairs with
opposite
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 gender. On the one hand, single-gender schools make it easier to stay comfortable and focused on schoolwork. The reason is that there
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 not going to be boys who always bully innocent girls for their style of dressing, it is common in some schools. Single-sex education provides total freedom and relaxation, as females do not have to feel awkward or weird.
For example
,
according to
 the latest
research
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 76% of
teenagers
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 girls
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admitted
 that they are struggling with
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bullying from boys.
One
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 the other hand,
this
 has a drawback as they might feel the
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deficit
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 of confidence when they want a relationship with
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 gender. The best explanation for
this
 is when they attend special schools they will not have an experience
how
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 to communicate with other
gender
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 correctly.
For instance
,
according to
 the statistics, 73% of graduates who
attented
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attended
 educational places in Kazakhstan called which is called KTL( Kazakh Turkish Lyseum) where both genders are
tought
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taught
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 separately, have
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tendancy
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tendency
 to suffer from not being able to build a healthy
relationship
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relationships
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 with their partners in adulthood. In conclusion, the main advantage is
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 learning area for both sexes, in the meantime,
disadvantage
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the disadvantage
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the abcense
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absence
 of self-esteem to create
future
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a future
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 happy family
bond
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task response
You present both an advantage and a disadvantage of single-gender education clearly.
supporting evidence
The inclusion of relevant examples and statistics strengthens your arguments and makes your points more persuasive.
structure
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion which summarize the main points effectively.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • segregation
  • discrimination
  • gender-specific
  • distractions
  • focus
  • safe
  • comfortable
  • gender stereotypes
  • social interaction
  • interpersonal skills
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