The chart shows information about various professions in the UK and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.
The given chart illustrates the data about different jobs in Britain and their incomes, meanwhile,
table
depicts the average working Correct article usage
the table
hours
per week.
Overall
, it is clear that
the top-ranked profession is underground drivers who earns
more even if they work less than others, in the meantime, firefighters who have more working Change the verb form
earn
hours
in comparison with others, earn less than drivers.In addition
, nurses have the smalest
salary.
Correct your spelling
smallest
Firstly
, the police started with
2100 and during the three years their salary went up dramatically to 2300 pounds by working 40 Change preposition
at
hours
, meanwhile, nurses began with the
salary of 1800, Correct article usage
a
however
their income increased slightly to 1900 by working 38 Add a comma
however,
hours
.
Secondly
, firefighters started earning 4000, nevertheless
, this
number rised
steadily to 4100, in the meantime, underground drivers began with 5000 pounds, Correct your spelling
rose
rises
raised
hence
, after three years their income had a noticeable increase to 51000 by working only 36 hours
in one week.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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