Rayxona The maps compares a factory area in the town of Norbiton, and scheduled future i... Rayxona The given map is illustrating changes on Norbiton town post the construction of human facilities. Before this altered scenario, the town seemed to be a manufacturing area.

Rayxona

The maps compares a factory area in the town of Norbiton, and scheduled future i...

Rayxona

The given map is illustrating changes on Norbiton town post the construction of human facilities. Before this altered scenario, the town seemed to be a manufacturing area.
The maps
compares
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compare
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a factory
area
in the
town
of Norbiton, and
scheduled
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schedule
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future
improvement
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improvements
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of
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to
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the site.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from
manufacturing
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a manufacturing
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area
to
mainly
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a mainly
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residential
area
.
In
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On
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the north
side
of the present industrial
area
is located a river. On the opposite of the river spotted
a
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farmland. A
road
around which placed in the middle of the
town
surrounded by many factories. Regarding the future
town
which will establish accommodation areas and will have many facilities for people. The farmland will be replaced in
north-east
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the north-east
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side
of
town
and
instead
of it
will
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a will
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be built a bridge which will
be continued
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continue
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to
big
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a big
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road
around.
In
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On
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the south
side
of the
town
will be added a small
road
around from big circle.
In
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On
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the north-west
side
of the big
road
around will be added
road
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a road
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which
surrounded
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is surrounded
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by houses. In the north-east part of a little
road
around will be constructed a medical
center
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centre
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and
in
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on
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the north-west
side
will
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there will
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be
put
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shops. In the middle of the east
road
will be built a playground.
In
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the end of the east
road
will be built a school and before
school
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the school
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will be put three accommodations.
Also
towards
bridge
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the bridge
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will be constructed high rise
buildins
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buildings
building
.
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