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Rayxona The maps compares a factory area in the town of Norbiton, and scheduled future i... Rayxona The given map is illustrating changes on Norbiton town post the construction of human facilities. Before this altered scenario, the town seemed to be a manufacturing area.

Rayxona The maps compares a factory area in the town of Norbiton, and scheduled future i... Rayxona The given map is illustrating changes on Norbiton town post the construction of human facilities. Before this altered scenario, the town seemed to be a manufacturing area.
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The maps
compares
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compare
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 a factory
area
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 in the
town
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 of Norbiton, and
scheduled
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schedule
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 future
improvement
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improvements
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of
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to
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 the site.
Overall
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, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from
manufacturing
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a manufacturing
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area
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 to
mainly
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a mainly
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 residential
area
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.
In
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On
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 the north
side
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 of the present industrial
area
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 is located a river. On the opposite of the river spotted
a
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farmland. A
road
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 around which placed in the middle of the
town
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 surrounded by many factories. Regarding the future
town
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 which will establish accommodation areas and will have many facilities for people. The farmland will be replaced in
north-east
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the north-east
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side
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 of
town
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 and
instead
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 of it
will
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a will
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 be built a bridge which will
be continued
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continue
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 to
big
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a big
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road
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 around.
In
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On
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 the south
side
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 of the
town
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 will be added a small
road
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 around from big circle.
In
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On
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 the north-west
side
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 of the big
road
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 around will be added
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road
Correct article usage
a road
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 which
surrounded
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is surrounded
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 by houses. In the north-east part of a little
road
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 around will be constructed a medical
center
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centre
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 and
in
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on
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 the north-west
side
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will
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there will
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 be
put
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apply
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shops. In the middle of the east
road
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 will be built a playground.
In
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At
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 the end of the east
road
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 will be built a school and before
school
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the school
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 will be put three accommodations.
Also
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 towards
bridge
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the bridge
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 will be constructed high rise
buildins
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buildings
building
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, town, side, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "compares" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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