Rayxona The maps compares a factory area in the town of Norbiton, and scheduled future i... Rayxona The given map is illustrating changes on Norbiton town post the construction of human facilities. Before this altered scenario, the town seemed to be a manufacturing area.
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The maps
compares
a factory Change the verb form
compare
area
in the town
of Norbiton, and scheduled
future Wrong verb form
schedule
improvement
Fix the agreement mistake
improvements
of
the site.
Change preposition
to
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from manufacturing
Correct article usage
a manufacturing
area
to mainly
residential Add an article
a mainly
the mainly
area
.
In
the north Change preposition
On
side
of the present industrial area
is located a river. On the opposite of the river spotted a
farmland. A Remove the article
apply
road
around which placed in the middle of the town
surrounded by many factories. Regarding the future town
which will establish accommodation areas and will have many facilities for people. The farmland will be replaced in north-east
Add an article
the north-east
side
of town
and instead
of it will
be built a bridge which will Correct article usage
a will
be continued
to Wrong verb form
continue
big
Correct article usage
a big
road
around. In
the south Change preposition
On
side
of the town
will be added a small road
around from big circle. In
the north-west Change preposition
On
side
of the big road
around will be added road
which Correct article usage
a road
surrounded
by houses. In the north-east part of a little Add a missing verb
is surrounded
road
around will be constructed a medical center
and Change the spelling
centre
in
the north-west Change preposition
on
side
will
be Correct pronoun usage
there will
put
shops. In the middle of the east Verb problem
apply
road
will be built a playground. In
the end of the east Change the preposition
At
road
will be built a school and before school
will be put three accommodations. Correct article usage
the school
Also
towards bridge
will be constructed high rise Correct article usage
the bridge
buildins
.Correct your spelling
buildings
building
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