The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs elucidate information about the fluctuation of
Copper
, Use synonyms
Nickel
, and Use synonyms
Zinc
in the whole time of 2014. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
nickel
had the biggest Use synonyms
decreasing
in the proportion Change the form of the verb
decrease
while
Linking Words
zinc
was the only one that can improve the value.
In January, Use synonyms
Nickel
was the most valuable metal, it changedUse synonyms
6
Change preposition
by 6
Use synonyms
percent
from Change the spelling
per cent
last
year. Linking Words
Copper
improvement only Use synonyms
one third
Add a hyphen
one-third
times
than Change to a singular noun
time
Nickel
Use synonyms
had
Unnecessary verb
apply
whereas
Linking Words
zinc
was the smallest with just halved than Use synonyms
nickel
or only 1 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
On
the middle of the year, three metals had dramatically fallen Change preposition
In
into
their lowest point. A month later, Change preposition
to
copper
, Use synonyms
nickel
, and Use synonyms
zinc
moderately Use synonyms
uprose
their value and had Verb problem
increased
changes
around -1 Change the verb form
changed
Use synonyms
percent
and 1 Change the spelling
per cent
Use synonyms
percent
. The prices were getting better over the next month despite having some fluctuations in October and ended with 1 Change the spelling
per cent
Use synonyms
percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
Nickel
, just below Use synonyms
than
2 Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
copper
, and Use synonyms
sharp
2 Correct article usage
a sharp
Use synonyms
percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
zinc
.Use synonyms
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