The chart below shows the percentage of children doing regular physical activity in the UK and the world average in 2018. summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart displays the average physical
activities
of children by gender and by age
group in Britain and the world
during the year 2018. According to
the data, younger age
groups, particularly British boys
aged 3-8, enjoy doing more physical activities
than those older age
groups. After 9-11 year olds, the world
averaged kids
accounted for the majority doing physical activities
.
90% of British boys
aged 3-5 years old played more physical activities
than girls
(85%) and the world
averaged kids
(75%) of the total children population. The figure for the 6-8 age
group increased at
95% for Change preposition
to
boys
, while
the other corresponding figure, girls
and the world
averaged kids
, showed a slight drop to 80% for girls
and remained the
same level as those aged 3-5 of the total. Change preposition
at the
Conversely
, the number of young people aged 9-11 of the world
average represented the highest of other figures at just over 80%, while
British boys
and girls
with
the same Change preposition
of
age
experienced a significant decline to 60% and just under 60% respectively.
Compared to teenagers aged 12 and above, the number of boys
doing physical activity decreased to 40%, reaching the same level as the boys
aged 16-18 as well as
the girls
saw a small fall to 55%. Similarly
, the world
averaged
Wrong verb form
average
kids
also
remarkably fell by nearly 20% of the 12-15 age
group. Additionally
, the girls
and the world
averaged
Wrong verb form
average
kids
both also
saw a similar trend in decrease at 16-18 year-olds.Submitted by bhavifasai on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, age, world, boys, kids, girls with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!