The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020
The following line graph compares the
number
of participants
for 5 given activities at a social centre located in Melbourne during the 20-year period of time (2000-2020).
Altogether it can be seen that in 2000, the film club constituted the highest number
of participants
and there was no member for musical performances. However
, in 2020, amateur dramatics made up the lowest number
of participants
. While
,
the film club kept the highest Remove the comma
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number
of participants
during the period of 20 years.
The number
of those who took part in table tennis rose slightly from 15 to 20 between 2000 and 2010, while
this
figure approximately tripled in 2020(58). Nobody took part in musical performances between 2000 and 2005, whereas
the number
of participants
surged dramatically from 2005 onwards and represented one-third of table tennis participants
in 2020(20).
The number
of participants
in film club
remained unchanged (65). Fix the agreement mistake
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However
, the number
of participants
in martial arts experienced instability between 2000 and 2020.
It is noticeable that the only figure which witnessed a downward trend was the number
of participants
in amateur dramatics. There were 25 participants
in this
activity in 2000, while
the number
made up one-fifth of that in 2020.Submitted by aradzandieh.dvm on
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