You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting

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Dear All, Hope you are all doing well

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I am writing

this

letter to explain about the parking

area

issues in our residential apartments.

Initially

, our apartment

has

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contains one parking

area

, which

are

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situated underground.

This

area

maximum

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of 50

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cars

can possible

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available

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to park at one time, sometimes I

shared

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my park

area

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with

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yours. Nowadays, visitors and guests who are coming to see their relatives in our flat,

they

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are parking their

vehicle

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this

basment

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basement

park.

Thus

, sometimes I

am encountering

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lot

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of problems

also

last

two days, I parked my private vehicle

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outside

security

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the security

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gate.

In addition

, all our apartment residents must conduct a special meeting to discuss

about

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this

issue.

Also

, I already informed about

this

issue to our flat association member.

Hence

, I kindly

requested

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you all should attend

this

meeting and close

this

issue. Eventually, all members have to

be send

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their

convinient

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convenient

time for

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the meeting. After

that

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I can arrange the meeting time and schedule. Best Regards John.

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suitable writing tone

Ensure consistent use of formal language suitable for a community letter. Avoid overly casual phrases to maintain a professional tone.

logical structure

Try to maintain a logical and clear structure within each paragraph. For example, separate the explanation of problems from the proposed solutions into distinct sections.

complete response

You successfully addressed all the required points: explaining the problems, suggesting solutions, and proposing a meeting.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing of the letter were appropriate and considerate, which sets a polite tone for the communication.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

170 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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