Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days, public debate has been going on over whether the increasing of sick people

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alternatives place

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rather than

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. I tend to believe that a high number of people believe

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unscientific

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a negative development for the following reasons. Two main factors support the idea of

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side of traditional medicines. The primary

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we need to take into consideration is that unconventional

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scientifically proven or trusted

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practices that cannot guarantee anything to your safety.

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, the “traditional doctor” will give you prescriptions and drugs without any base that can make your health

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dangerous.

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a lot of

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and their revenue.

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their business,

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if the hospital does not have a patient anymore, the hospital will be bankrupt and

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in traditional ways is not wrong because

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traditional medicines

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cheaper and

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to reach. Despite that, it should be the

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to make healthcare facilities free and spread around the city. In Conclusion, I would argue that using untrusted

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has a lot of drawbacks for ourselves and

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doctors

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, it would be generally advisable for

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to allocate funding for health and build a lot of

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