Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates Brandfield
city
, which that the
city
planners have decided to build new facilities
such
as: shopping mall .
Besides
, the planners were propoased two sites S1 and S2.
Overall
, the river is devided the area in the two sites: S1 is in the east side of the
city
and S1 which is bigger which is located in the west of Brandfield.
Initially
, the rail way cross the area from the southren east to the northen west.
In addition
, the
city
centre is located between the railway road and a road.
Also
, the river go throw the center of the
city
. In S1 ( the first site propoased), there are aIndustral estate , the
city
center , and a small part of the housing estate.
On the other hand
, the golf cours and park covered most of
this
site.
Furthermore
, about more than two third of the residential is in S2 ( the second site propoased)
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proximity
  • residential area
  • industrial zone
  • city center
  • main road
  • benefits
  • convenience
  • traffic congestion
  • accessibility
  • workers
  • compare
  • differences
  • pros and cons
  • suitable
  • analysis
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