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Band 3.5

artificial intelligence will soon replace teachers in the clasrooms. do you agree with this statement? what is an alternative to traditional face- to-face teaching.

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over the past few decades, classrooms have been equipped with Artificial Intelligence
insted
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instead
 of teachers, I
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disagree
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statement
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 because, no
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amount
 of techno;logy can replace the experience and
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guidance
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 provided by
professional
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professionals
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. Computer technology has taken over several aspects of life including the educational
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sector
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.
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, in order to produce a good student a mentor should have
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 amount
experience
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of experience
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as well as
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 the ability to comprehend the
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requirements of
 a pupil.
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, a recent study found that
students
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 by teachers have
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excelled
 in becoming
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upstanding
citizen
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citizens
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.
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,
students
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 who utilized machine learning lacked
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several
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departments,
such
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as as-Analytical
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as-Analytical
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analytical
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 skills,
problem solving
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problem-solving
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 skills,
creativity
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,
along
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low Emotional IQ. On the
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other
 hand, faculty
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 not just provide education to an undergrad, they
also
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 aid the student in
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ardious
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arduous
 journey of schooling by providing guidance.
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, every educational
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institute
institution
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has been provided with teachers acting as counsellors, who deal with problems faced by
students
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such
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,
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 Depression, Anxiety, and
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burnout
. In doing so, they prevent
students
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self-harm
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self- harm
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self-harm
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 and mental health
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issues
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issues
. In a nutshell, Robotics substituting educators in an education
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system
 shows advancement in human technology. From where
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 stand, the combination
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 Artificial Intelligence and teaching faculty will
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yield
 better results.

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spelling grammar
Carefully proofread your essay for spelling and grammatical errors. Words like 'diagree,' 'amounty,' 'insted,' and 'techno;logy' need correction for clarity.
introduction structure
Your introduction should more clearly outline your main points. This will help the reader follow your arguments more easily.
coherence improvement
Use more linking words and phrases to improve the flow of your essay. Transitions such as 'Furthermore,' 'Additionally,' or 'Moreover' can help create coherence between paragraphs.
example relevance
Provide more specific examples to support your arguments. Reference studies or data can greatly enhance the persuasiveness of your points.
clear stance
You have a clear stance on the topic, which is well-articulated throughout the essay.
insight societal role
The essay shows understanding of the role that teachers play beyond education, particularly in mental health support.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personalized learning
  • cater to individual needs
  • surpass
  • repetitive administrative tasks
  • interactive
  • creative aspects
  • emotional support
  • social skills development
  • inspiration
  • collaborative learning platforms
  • online courses
  • flexibility
  • accessibility
  • blended learning models
  • traditional classroom methods
  • leverage
  • strengths
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