The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.
The two pie charts show percentages of the marital status of each
Canada
and Replace the word
Canadian
Australia
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Australian
populations
divided into 6 categories (Separated but not divorced, Married, never married, Widowed, Divorced, Fix the agreement mistake
population
Same sex
marriage).
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Same-sex
Overall
, most people in Australia
and Canada
either are or have been married, and although
the Australian percentage is double the Canadian, the figure (2%) is still low.
More people are single (separated, divorced, widowed, never married) than are married in Canada
total
of 13 % and with very similar Add an article
a total
percentges
in Correct your spelling
percentages
Australia
of 15 %.
Canadian marriages are more likely to end in separation than Australian ones with the percentage of each is 53% and 41 % respectively.
Not only that same sex
marriage is very low in Add a hyphen
same-sex
Canada
at 3% it is also
not found in Australia
. The total percentge
who are currently in active marriage people is about 85% in Correct your spelling
percentage
Canada
and 87% in Australia
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