The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The multiple maps compare the vast development of a museum's interior within a decade, between 1998 and 2008.
Overall
, there has been an introduction to a lot of new facilities, such
as a restaurant, a cafe
's sitting area
, and fountains. Moreover
, many places have exchanged their locations.
In 1998, the garden was located in the centre of the area
, with an entrance in the south, and a cafe
in the north. Most of the areas were focused on the south region, for instance
, a temporary exhibition
room
and a shop on the western and eastern of the entrance, respectively. Furthermore
, in the east of the shop, there was an area
separated into two, a WC in the upper part and a bags and coats room
in the lower part. While
for rest of the area
, which was the eastern and western side of the garden were permanent exhibition
rooms.
In 2008, the attractions were concentrated in the middle and west, while
the east was for permanent exhibition
rooms. Several new objects were built, for example
, there were fountains in the garden and a cafe
sitting area
just below the cafe
. Additionally
, the cafe
has been equipped with a WC on the right side, whereas
the left side of the cafe
has been reconstructed into a new restaurant. Under the restaurant, there stood the temporary exhibition
room
. Lastly
, the old temporary exhibition
room
was redeveloped into two rooms, a bags and coats room
and a shop.Submitted by evaagustine11 on
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