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Some people think that teachers should be able to ask distruptive children to leave the class. Do you think it is the best way to deal with distruptive children in the classroom? What other solutions are there?

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Nowadays some teachers still believe that
distruptive
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disruptive
children
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 their own classes.
This
 attitude from educational workers has both sides, advantages and disadvantages, but I believe that it is a bad way and the drawbacks outweigh the Benedicts.
Firstly
, the main disadvantage is the fact about the social and emotional skills. The most of time
Children
 do not process correctly why they have been leaving
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their classroom if they have under 5 years old, certainly can't understand what's is
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, only will do what the teacher asks and could become
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 and suffer from bullying about it,
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 the end, it may do
children
 more nervous. There are some researchers that say how much
this
 attitude is poor for a child's learning,
this
 practice is forbidden to do in the same countries.
On the other hand
, it is important for young people to learn that their actions have consequences and in real life have a law called to action and reaction.
For instance
 if a child
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 others he may receive a bit or punch. In conclusion,
although
 there is an advantage to knowing about action and reaction, In my opinion, questions about emotional feelings or social behaviours far outweigh whatever advantage and
this
 question about behaviour
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 to be analysed by specialists, not by teachers because teachers have specifics knowledge at specifics subjects and
instead
 of be helping
children
 with punish they may be creating more psychics problems in the future for society.
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The essay addresses both the advantages and disadvantages of removing disruptive children from the classroom, which shows an attempt at balanced discussion.

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