The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside Village and Fonton, a neighboring town, since 1962.

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The three maps show how

Meadowside

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Village

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and

Fonton

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have developed since 1962, in 1985, and now. A notable change is seen from the images,

Meadowside

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Village

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and

Fonton

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's sizes have become increasingly bigger than in the past and they

finally

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merged into one .

Furthermore

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, the infrastructures and facilities have changed significantly over the given period. In 1962,

Meadowside

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Village

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was a very small town and had a small road crossing it. In those days,

Fonton

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was small as well. And was located in

Meadowside

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Village

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's east there was already a railroad crossing it. After 23 years, by 1985, with

Meadowside

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Village

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and

Fonton

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expanded, the road crossing the town had got bigger. A new street connecting the two towns,

moreover

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, has been constructed. A leisure complex and housing estate have been built to the north of

Meadowside

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Village

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Also

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, a superstore has been built across the street from the housing estate. At present, the two towns have expanded more and eventually combined. Between those towns, not only a train station

that is

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connected to the railroad has been built, but

also

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a hotel has been

done

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built

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to the north of the station.

In addition

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, a business park has been located across the street connecting those.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words meadowside, village, fonton with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

208 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban expansion
amalgamation
transportation infrastructure
land use
residential areas
commercial zones
agricultural land
population density
housing development
amenities
facilities
environmental impact
urbanization
transformation
economic growth

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The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside Village and Fonton, a neighboring town, since 1962.

The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? To reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.