The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside Village and Fonton, a neighboring town, since 1962.

The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside Village and Fonton, a neighboring town, since 1962.
The three maps show how
Meadowside
Village
and
Fonton
have developed since 1962, in 1985, and now. A notable change is seen from the images,
Meadowside
Village
and
Fonton
's sizes have become increasingly bigger than in the past and they
finally
merged into one .
Furthermore
, the infrastructures and facilities have changed significantly over the given period. In 1962,
Meadowside
Village
was a very small town and had a small road crossing it. In those days,
Fonton
was small as well. And was located in
Meadowside
Village
's east there was already a railroad crossing it. After 23 years, by 1985, with
Meadowside
Village
and
Fonton
expanded, the road crossing the town had got bigger. A new street connecting the two towns,
moreover
, has been constructed. A leisure complex and housing estate have been built to the north of
Meadowside
Village
.
Also
, a superstore has been built across the street from the housing estate. At present, the two towns have expanded more and eventually combined. Between those towns, not only a train station
that is
connected to the railroad has been built, but
also
a hotel has been
done
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built
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to the north of the station.
In addition
, a business park has been located across the street connecting those.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban expansion
  • amalgamation
  • transportation infrastructure
  • land use
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • agricultural land
  • population density
  • housing development
  • amenities
  • facilities
  • environmental impact
  • urbanization
  • transformation
  • economic growth
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