The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside Village and Fonton, a neighboring town, since 1962.

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Meadowside

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Village

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and

Fonton

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have developed since 1962, in 1985, and now. A notable change is seen from the images,

Meadowside

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Village

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and

Fonton

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's sizes have become increasingly bigger than in the past and they

finally

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merged into one .

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, the infrastructures and facilities have changed significantly over the given period. In 1962,

Meadowside

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Village

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was a very small town and had a small road crossing it. In those days,

Fonton

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was small as well. And was located in

Meadowside

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Village

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's east there was already a railroad crossing it. After 23 years, by 1985, with

Meadowside

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Village

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and

Fonton

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expanded, the road crossing the town had got bigger. A new street connecting the two towns,

moreover

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, has been constructed. A leisure complex and housing estate have been built to the north of

Meadowside

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Village

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Also

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, a superstore has been built across the street from the housing estate. At present, the two towns have expanded more and eventually combined. Between those towns, not only a train station

that is

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connected to the railroad has been built, but

also

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a hotel has been

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built

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to the north of the station.

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, a business park has been located across the street connecting those.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words meadowside, village, fonton with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

208 words

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urban expansion
amalgamation
transportation infrastructure
land use
residential areas
commercial zones
agricultural land
population density
housing development
amenities
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environmental impact
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The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside Village and Fonton, a neighboring town, since 1962.

Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many people prefer to shop in supermarkets rather than small shops or local markets. Is this positive or negative development? Discuss and give your opinion.

Some people believe that handwriting is no longer useful in the modern world and should not be taught in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?