The maps show the harbour in different times in 2000 and now
Overall
, there are new amenities were added and some features redeveloped and displaced another
Correct quantifier usage
apply
one
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The main road is located western part of Porth Harbour and Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
remained unchanged. in 2000, only one car park had an entrance from the main road but today, both car park entrances had
displaced only outside. Showers and toilets remained its place, Wrong verb form
have
while
Marine(private yachts) and Fishing boats were changed with each other.
In the Northern part, also
one Dock was added while
a public beach still serves tourists. Directly opposite of new dock built new cafe and shops just beyond to lifeboat. also
here some redevelopment and construction in the south-east part. the road was extended and reached the Castle (disused) and that building was reconstructed and now it serves as hotel
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a hotel
And Public
beach that was located old castle Correct your spelling
The public
currently,
transformed Wrong verb form
has been
to
Change preposition
into
private
beach for the hotel
Add an article
a private
the private
To conclude
, The harbour undergoes redevelopment andCorrect your spelling
construction
constraction
Correct your spelling
construction
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