The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table presents the expenditure on
petrol
for the world's top ten expensive
countries
with financial data. It is evident that
,
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most
countries
with high-price
petrol
were in Europe, except for Turkey and
Eritrea
.
Norwegian
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spend more
their
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of their
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money on
petrol
but
shared
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share
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the smallest proportion of their
income
.
However
,
Eritrea
accounted for the highest
percentage
of
income
spent on
petrol
. Norway
spend
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spent
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the highest amount of money on
petrol
around $319.85, which was the lowest
percentage
of their total
income
, at 7.40%, compared to other
countries
. The second highest country spending on
petrol
was Turkey, with $315.96,
while
this
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also
accounted for the second-largest amount of monthly
income
at 34.20%. The
others
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other
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countries
,
such
as Holland and Italy, the spending on
petrol
ranged between $288.65 and $284.74. with the
percentage
of monthly earnings at 10% and 15.50% respectively. The expenditure of Greece
also
showed
the
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similar amount of money, with $282.8, but the proportion of their
income
stood at 25.40%, making it the third highest
percentage
. For the other
countries
,
such
as Denmark, Britain, Sweden,
Eritrea
and Belgium, their
petrol
expenses were under $280.
However
,
Eritrea
paid half of their
income
for
petrol
.
Apart from
this
, the other nations showed
the
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small proportion of their monthly
income
varied from 10.30% to 8.10%
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however, such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words petrol, countries, eritrea, income, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geographical distribution
  • per capita income
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • correlate
  • anomalies
  • impact
  • cost of living
  • transportation
  • external factors
  • oil production rates
  • import dependencies
  • subsidies
  • taxation policies
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