The pie chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at lea
The presented line graph and table
compares
the differences between Correct subject-verb agreement
compare
Australian’s
visitors by region of origin .
Change noun form
Australian
Overall
, it is given four areas from where tourists come to Australia. It is clear that
travelers
from Europe have the highest proportion , Change the spelling
travellers
also
they stay more than the
people from other areas . Meanwhile , Asians have the lowest indicator and Correct article usage
apply
less
average length of stay.
The first figure demonstrates the Correct word choice
lowest
quantity
of sightseers in Change the quantifier
number
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
First
place is European tourists with 37 % , the second one is US tourists with 35% , which is a little less than the first one. Correct article usage
The first
And the
other two are Asians and other travelers withCorrect word choice
The
8
% Correct article usage
an 8
of
difference .
The second table gives information about average lengths , most popular Change preposition
apply
accomodation
and main activity. There are a bit differences between their results in lengths of stay.Correct your spelling
accommodation
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