The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

#floor #plan #library #years

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The picture compares the transformation look of a central

library

Use synonyms

in the 20 years before and today.

Overall

Linking Words

, it can be seen that the

library

Use synonyms

has more facilities nowadays than before and only the number of rooms remain, but the function of it has changed. 20 years ago, the

library

Use synonyms

consisted of 4 areas, for children’s

books

Use synonyms

, an enquiry desk, a reading

room

Use synonyms

, and a playing

room

Use synonyms

(CDs, videos, computer games), in every corner of the whole

library

Use synonyms

In addition

Linking Words

, the

adult

Use synonyms

space was in the middle of the

library

Use synonyms

which contained

fiction

Use synonyms

and non-

fiction

Use synonyms

books

Use synonyms

, at the west and east side of the entrance respectively.

Moreover

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

section was separated by the tables and chairs that were placed clearly parallel to the entrance. Today, all places

were

Wrong verb form

have been

show examples

replaced by a lecture

room

Use synonyms

, a café, a computer

room

Use synonyms

, and a kid's space (children’s

fiction

Use synonyms

publication and for storytelling events) respectively. The

adult

Use synonyms

fiction

Use synonyms

books

Use synonyms

are replaced by all reference

books

Use synonyms

while

Linking Words

these

books

Use synonyms

are moved to the

adult

Use synonyms

non-

fiction

Use synonyms

books

Use synonyms

space, which is no longer anymore.

Additionally

Linking Words

, an information desk and self-service machines were found

together with

Linking Words

the

adult

Use synonyms

fiction

Use synonyms

books

Use synonyms

Submitted by nirmalindah on Fri Jun 21 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.

▼

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

▼

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

▼

Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books, room, adult, fiction with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

▼

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

191 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
layout
shelving
reading area
reference section
encyclopedias
dictionaries
circulation desk
transactions
digital media
computer stations
multimedia rooms
café area
social environment
leisure-friendly
expanded reading areas
user experience
comfortable seating
children's section
engage younger readers

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5.5
band
You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. Write at least 150 words.
I'm working for your company for now ten amazing years and I have seen some information in my instagram feed about a training course and I saw it very useful for my position.
4
band
There is an increasing amount of advertising directed at children, encouraging them to buy toys and snacks. Many parents are worried that these advertisements put too much pressure on children, while some advertisements claim that they provide useful information to children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Advertising sectors are widely nowadays so that some advartisers are doing the target at children and sell the toys and snacks, though some advartisers are want to give useful informations to the children. Parents are worried about the advertisements and they want to give useful informations to their children via advertisements. In my opinion, some of children are provided about their social study via online advertisements so i think that's good ideas. On the other Hand, Selling toys and snacks for children on advertisements are supported to develop children's pleasure.
<4
band
Government around the world spend too much money on treating illness and diseases and not enough on health education and prevention. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
While government around the world spend a significant amount of money on treating diseases and ailments, they do not spend enough money on health education and prevention. I personally agree with this statement because government do not believe in educating and raising awareness about diseases.
7
band
Computers and AI technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can AI enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development.
To derive a double benefit from anything is considered a bonus, and this is especially the case when discussing leisure activities for children. The idea to fuse both education and entertainment into one activity is a goal of many educators; some would even believe that failure to do this makes the activity pointless. Drawing from examples in Sweden and reviewing games, such as Pokemon, I firmly believe that all activities should have an educational value.
5
band
Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, in many schools, musical instruments have been compulsory subjects. Personally, I completely agree with the tremendous boons of this lessons; there are two major reasons and it will be illustrates in the following paragraph:

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

Government around the world spend too much money on treating illness and diseases and not enough on health education and prevention. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Computers and AI technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can AI enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development.

Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?