The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and

how it looks now
The picture compares the transformation look of a central
library
in the 20 years before and today.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
library
has more facilities nowadays than before and only the number of rooms remain, but the function of it has changed. 20 years ago, the
library
consisted of 4 areas, for children’s
books
, an enquiry desk, a reading
room
, and a playing
room
(CDs, videos, computer games), in every corner of the whole
library
.
In addition
, the
adult
space was in the middle of the
library
which contained
fiction
and non-
fiction
books
, at the west and east side of the entrance respectively.
Moreover
,
this
section was separated by the tables and chairs that were placed clearly parallel to the entrance. Today, all places
were
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replaced by a lecture
room
, a café, a computer
room
, and a kid's space (children’s
fiction
publication and for storytelling events) respectively. The
adult
fiction
books
are replaced by all reference
books
,
while
these
books
are moved to the
adult
non-
fiction
books
space, which is no longer anymore.
Additionally
, an information desk and self-service machines were found
together with
the
adult
fiction
books
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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