The pie charts show the amount of money that a Kazakh charity organization spent and received in 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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given

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pie chart illustrates the amount of money that a Kazakh charity organization spent and received in 2019,

It is clear that

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Invested Income and Government Grants

is

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are

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the lowest

source

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sources

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of

revenue

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for the charity.

According to

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the pie chart, the community contributes 10.4%

on

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of

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the income of the organization,

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,

Kazakh

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Kazakhs

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rely heavily on Donated food earnings,

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, 0.4% of the profits for the commission is anonymous,

there

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and there

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is no clear information about where

this

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profit came from.

Secondly

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, approximately 95% of the expenditure of the commission was spent on Program services which is a big percentage,

whereas

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1,6% is

spender

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spent

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on management and 2.6% on Fundraising. In conclusion, the organization didn't spend all the

revenue

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, they took about 1.5% of the

revenue

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for them,in my

opinion

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opinion,

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I consider it fair because at least they should earn some money in order to encourage them to increase their

revenue

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in the next budget.