The pie charts show the amount of money that a Kazakh charity organization spent and received in 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
pie chart illustrates the amount of money that a Kazakh charity organization spent and received in 2019, Verb problem
apply
It is clear that
Invested Income and Government Grants is
the lowest Correct subject-verb agreement
are
source
of Fix the agreement mistake
sources
revenue
for the charity.
According to
the pie chart, the community contributes 10.4% on
the income of the organization,Change preposition
of
However
, Kazakh
rely heavily on Donated food earnings,Fix the agreement mistake
Kazakhs
Nonetheless
, 0.4% of the profits for the commission is anonymous, there
is no clear information about where Correct word choice
and there
this
profit came from.
Secondly
, approximately 95% of the expenditure of the commission was spent on Program services which is a big percentage, whereas
1,6% is spender
on management and 2.6% on Fundraising.
In conclusion, the organization didn't spend all the Replace the word
spent
revenue
, they took about 1.5% of the revenue
for them,in my opinion
I consider it fair because at least they should earn some money in order to encourage them to increase their Add the comma(s)
opinion,
revenue
in the next budget.Submitted by yazanalt523 on
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