The line graph shows the international student enrolment numbers at De Salle University from 1980 to 2020.

The line graph shows the international student enrolment numbers at De Salle University from 1980 to 2020.
This
line graph represents the volume (in thousands) of
students
of five different nationalities, that enrolled at De Salle
University
between the years 1980 and 2020. What is striking is the rapid increase in the number of enrollments of Indian
students
, from a mere 500
students
at the beginning of the period to 15000, by 2020.
Moreover
, Vietnamese and Nepali applicant numbers steadily grew till 2010 (under 5000), after which they exponentially increased to more than double, in the next 10 years.
On the other hand
, the
university
attracts very few
students
from Columbia throughout the given period.
While
there was a greater increase in enlistments by Indosian citizens, their numbers were superseded by
students
from Nepal and Vietnam, from 2010 to 2020.
Overall
, there has been a dramatic increment of enlisters to De Salle
University
over the four decades.
However
, it is crucial to note that
students
hailing from some countries prefer the
university
more than others.
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