The line graph shows the international student enrolment numbers at De Salle University from 1980 to 2020.

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line graph represents the volume (in thousands) of

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of five different nationalities, that enrolled at De Salle

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between the years 1980 and 2020. What is striking is the rapid increase in the number of enrollments of Indian

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, from a mere 500

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at the beginning of the period to 15000, by 2020.

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, Vietnamese and Nepali applicant numbers steadily grew till 2010 (under 5000), after which they exponentially increased to more than double, in the next 10 years.

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, the

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attracts very few

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from Columbia throughout the given period.

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there was a greater increase in enlistments by Indosian citizens, their numbers were superseded by

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from Nepal and Vietnam, from 2010 to 2020.

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, there has been a dramatic increment of enlisters to De Salle

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over the four decades.

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, it is crucial to note that

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hailing from some countries prefer the

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more than others.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

158 words

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The line graph shows the international student enrolment numbers at De Salle University from 1980 to 2020.

In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for a healthy and long life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?