The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The three pie charts
illustrates
the average Change the verb form
illustrate
consumption
of sodium
, saturated fat, and added sugar
by meal.
Overall
, while
the intake of sodium
and saturated fat is higher at dinner
than any
other Change preposition
at any
meals
, added Fix the agreement mistake
meal
sugar
is eaten most in snacks.
Sodium
consumption
is highest at dinner
and second highest at lunch, making up to
43% and 29% of total Change preposition
apply
sodium
consumption
respectively. The proportions of this
type of nutrient taken in
snack time and breakfast are the same, both at 14%. Change preposition
at
Dinner
and lunch also
account for the largest and the second largest proportion of total saturated fat intake respectively, at 37% and 26%. However
, a greater proportion is eaten at snack time, at 21%, rather than breakfast 16
%.
Compared with the other two nutrients, added Change preposition
at 16
sugar
has a relatively low percentage of consumption
at dinner
, at 23%. It is snacks the main source of added sugar
intake, at 42%. However
, like the other nutrients, it is also
consumed least at breakfast, at only 16%.Submitted by dnm.best on
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