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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
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The two maps
describes
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describe
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 the changes in
main
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 pathway to a city hospital in the years 2007 and 2010
..
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.
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Overall
, the development of new routes and amenities
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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has been extended after
few
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a few
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 years to reach
Correct article usage
the hospital
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hospital
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hospitals
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 easily.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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