The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town called Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town called Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the transformations applied to a
town
called Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
Overall
,
it is clear that
current
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layout effectively
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the spaces, catering for
large
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a large
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number
of residents. In 1780, the
town
contained only 100 homes, including four farms situated in the middle near the
river
.
On
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the far right area, there were only two
villages
, the
town
was surrounded
with
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numerous trees. In 1860, the
town
had
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made
number
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a number
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of modifications. These modifications involved, adding
bridge
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and
main
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road that connect the residents with the next part of the
town
, reducing the
number
of farms to
the
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half, removing some trees, and increasing the
number
of
villages
and homes to 3 and 200, respectively. By 2000, the
number
of citizens had significantly increased to 500, leading to
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more facilities and services. These include
,
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removing the farms, constructing two schools and sports fields,
building
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and building
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2 roads one of them is connected to the
river
and directed to the
villages
,
while
the other one
connected
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to the
villages
and directed to the schools and other facilities.
Moreover
, a
number
of shops
added
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were added
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next
the
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to the
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river
and a wetland for birds
at the end
of the
river
.
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