The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town called Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the transformations applied to a
town
called Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
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current
layout effectively Correct article usage
the current
utilize
the spaces, catering for Change the verb form
utilizes
large
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a large
the large
number
of residents.
In 1780, the Use synonyms
town
contained only 100 homes, including four farms situated in the middle near the Use synonyms
river
. Use synonyms
On
the far right area, there were only two Change preposition
In
villages
, the Use synonyms
town
was surrounded Use synonyms
with
numerous trees.
In 1860, the Change preposition
by
town
Use synonyms
had
made Unnecessary verb
apply
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number
of modifications. These modifications involved, adding Change the article
a number
the number
bridge
and Add an article
a bridge
main
road that connect the residents with the next part of the Add an article
the main
town
, reducing the Use synonyms
number
of farms to Use synonyms
the
half, removing some trees, and increasing the Correct article usage
apply
number
of Use synonyms
villages
and homes to 3 and 200, respectively.
By 2000, the Use synonyms
number
of citizens had significantly increased to 500, leading to Use synonyms
add
more facilities and services. These includeVerb problem
apply
,
removing the farms, constructing two schools and sports fields, Remove the comma
apply
building
2 roads one of them is connected to the Correct word choice
and building
river
and directed to the Use synonyms
villages
, Use synonyms
while
the other one Linking Words
connected
to the Add a missing verb
is connected
villages
and directed to the schools and other facilities. Use synonyms
Moreover
, a Linking Words
number
of shops Use synonyms
added
next Add a missing verb
were added
the
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to the
river
and a wetland for birds Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
river
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, number, river, villages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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