Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy for them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

The importance of keeping

pets

for

children

which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial

while

others reject

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notion. The subsequent influence of

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controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational.

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elaborate both views of

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, the first and foremost reason behind

this

is that some

pets

are wild in nature which

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danger

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for

child

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children

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.

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, if you leave your

children

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with

raccoon

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snake

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fox

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which are wild and their actions are unpredictable.

Moreover

, friendly dogs and cats can spread the viruses which will give harmful diseases. So that's why

this

group

o

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people do not allow

keep

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pet

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with their

children

. Probing ahead, In my opinion, one of

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underlying

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that friendly cats and dogs emphasise the mental health of

children

by showing unconditional care and love.

Pets

teach them social skills

such

as compassion, sensibility and responsibilities.

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,

pets

are good

companion

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companions

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of

child

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children

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by animals by learning to get companionship,

responsibilities

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. Apart from

reasons

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aforementioned above it can be clearly stated why many are in favour of keeping

pets

. To recapitulate,

according to

the arguments aforementioned above one can reach

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a

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conclusion that kids are very

soft hearted

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, you can keep them

play

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with

pets

and

let

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them learn new skills

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indeed

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great to ignore.