The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town called Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town called Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The multiple maps compare the vast development of Willington city in three periods, which are 1780, 1860, and 2000.
Overall
, there has been an introduction of some new facilities
such
as a bridge, a road, sports fields, schools, shops, and a lot of houses.
Moreover
, there had been a significant reduction of wood to build those buildings. In the year 1780, the
river
located in the west of the town did not have a bridge,
however
, it was constructed in 1860. Other than that, there was a decline in terms of farm fields from 4 to 2 in the second year.
Moreover
, a new road connecting the
river
and the village had been developed in 1860.
Additionally
, the number of residences was multiplied 2 times from 100 to 200 homes in 1860,
while
the woods declined to merely five in
this
period. In the latest period, the farm was completely demolished
as well as
the woods. The woods were transformed into two schools and three sports fields and a new road was built to interconnect those buildings to the village, which contained 500 houses.
Lastly
, on the eastern side of the
river
, several shops were established. Meanwhile, in the downstream of the
river
, there stood a wetland for birds.
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