The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town called Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The multiple maps compare the vast development of Willington city in three periods, which are 1780, 1860, and 2000.
Overall
, there has been an introduction of some new facilities Linking Words
such
as a bridge, a road, sports fields, schools, shops, and a lot of houses. Linking Words
Moreover
, there had been a significant reduction of wood to build those buildings.
In the year 1780, the Linking Words
river
located in the west of the town did not have a bridge, Use synonyms
however
, it was constructed in 1860. Other than that, there was a decline in terms of farm fields from 4 to 2 in the second year. Linking Words
Moreover
, a new road connecting the Linking Words
river
and the village had been developed in 1860. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the number of residences was multiplied 2 times from 100 to 200 homes in 1860, Linking Words
while
the woods declined to merely five in Linking Words
this
period.
In the latest period, the farm was completely demolished Linking Words
as well as
the woods. The woods were transformed into two schools and three sports fields and a new road was built to interconnect those buildings to the village, which contained 500 houses. Linking Words
Lastly
, on the eastern side of the Linking Words
river
, several shops were established. Meanwhile, in the downstream of the Use synonyms
river
, there stood a wetland for birds.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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