The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the sources of different energy produced in 4 nations(
Morocco
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,
Vietnam
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,
Sweden
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, and
India
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), between 2003 and 2008.
Overall
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, Fossil fuel was the most
producing
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in
India
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and
Vietnam
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,
while
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it was the least in both
Sweden
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and
Morocco
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.
In contrast
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, the highest
percentage
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of
hydro
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hydropower
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power
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was in
Morocco
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, and
then
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in
Vietnam
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. On the one hand,
India
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produced fossil fuel higher than
Morocco
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the percentages are 82% to 5% respectively.
Moreover
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, the
percentage
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of produced nuclear
power
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was 14% in
India
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,
while
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there was not any produced nuclear
power
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in
Morocco
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,
In contrast
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, the highest
percentage
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of
hydro
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hydropower
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power
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was in
Morocco
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95
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at 95
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% ,
while
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only 14% in
India
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.
On the other hand
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, a higher proportion of produced fossil fuel in
Vietnam
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above
a
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half, which in
Sweden
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was a tiny proportion.
while
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Sweden
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produced more nuclear
power
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at 44%,
while
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the same
percentage
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in
Vietnam
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in
hydro
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hydropower
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power
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and
Vietnam
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did not produce any nuclear
power
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words morocco, vietnam, sweden, india, percentage, power with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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