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The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the sources of different energy produced in 4 nations(
Morocco
,
Vietnam
,
Sweden
, and
India
), between 2003 and 2008.
Overall
, Fossil fuel was the most
producing
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 in
India
 and
Vietnam
,
while
 it was the least in both
Sweden
 and
Morocco
.
In contrast
, the highest
percentage
 of
hydro
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hydropower
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power
 was in
Morocco
, and
then
 in
Vietnam
. On the one hand,
India
 produced fossil fuel higher than
Morocco
 the percentages are 82% to 5% respectively.
Moreover
, the
percentage
 of produced nuclear
power
 was 14% in
India
,
while
 there was not any produced nuclear
power
 in
Morocco
,
In contrast
, the highest
percentage
 of
hydro
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hydropower
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power
 was in
Morocco
95
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% ,
while
 only 14% in
India
.
On the other hand
, a higher proportion of produced fossil fuel in
Vietnam
 above
a
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half, which in
Sweden
 was a tiny proportion.
while
Sweden
 produced more nuclear
power
 at 44%,
while
 the same
percentage
 in
Vietnam
 in
hydro
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hydropower
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power
 and
Vietnam
 did not produce any nuclear
power
 .
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