The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate the sources of different energy produced in 4 nations(

Morocco

Vietnam

Sweden

, and

India

), between 2003 and 2008.

Overall

, Fossil fuel was the most

producing

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produced

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India

and

Vietnam

while

it was the least in both

Sweden

and

Morocco

In contrast

, the highest

percentage

hydro

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hydropower

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power

was in

Morocco

, and

then

Vietnam

. On the one hand,

India

produced fossil fuel higher than

Morocco

the percentages are 82% to 5% respectively.

Moreover

, the

percentage

of produced nuclear

power

was 14% in

India

while

there was not any produced nuclear

power

Morocco

In contrast

, the highest

percentage

hydro

Correct your spelling

hydropower

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power

was in

Morocco

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at 95

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% ,

while

only 14% in

India

On the other hand

, a higher proportion of produced fossil fuel in

Vietnam

above

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apply

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half, which in

Sweden

was a tiny proportion.

while

Sweden

produced more nuclear

power

at 44%,

while

the same

percentage

Vietnam

hydro

Correct your spelling

hydropower

show examples

power

and

Vietnam

did not produce any nuclear

power

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