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The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three
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 charts show how many journal articles are read by three different groups of academic people (all
students
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,
PhD
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students
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, and junior
lecturers
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) at an Australian university per
week
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.
It is clear that
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 a large portion of
PhD
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students
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 tend to read more
books
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 compared to other groups,
while
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 the number of
books
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 read weekly by all
students
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 is the least. The
pie
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 chart for
PhD
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students
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 shows that 80% of the individuals in
this
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 group read more than 12
books
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 each
week
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,
whereas
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 24% of junior
lecturers
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 read
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 number of
books
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, and the same
sector
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 for all
students
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 is only 12%. Reading 1 to 5
books
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 per
week
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 is the fewest number of
books
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 that are shown in the
pie
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 charts, and the
pie
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 chart for all
students
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 has the most significant percentage of
this
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sector
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, 67%. Interestingly,
this
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sector
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 is negligible for the other two charts, 5% and 1% for
PhD
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students
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 and junior
lecturers
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, respectively. The
last
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sector
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 is reading 6 to 11
books
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 per
week
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. With three-quarters of all individuals, junior
lecturers
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 were placed at the top in terms of reading 6 to 11
books
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 per
week
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, and for all
students
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 chart, it was 21%. With 15% of individuals who read 6 to 11
books
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 per
week
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,
PhD
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students
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 were placed
at the end
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, students, phd, lecturers, week, books, sector with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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