The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The three

pie

charts show how many journal articles are read by three different groups of academic people (all

students

PhD

students

, and junior

lecturers

) at an Australian university per

week

It is clear that

a large portion of

PhD

students

tend to read more

books

compared to other groups,

while

the number of

books

read weekly by all

students

is the least. The

pie

chart for

PhD

students

shows that 80% of the individuals in

this

group read more than 12

books

each

week

whereas

24% of junior

lecturers

read

this

number of

books

, and the same

sector

for all

students

is only 12%. Reading 1 to 5

books

per

week

is the fewest number of

books

that are shown in the

pie

charts, and the

pie

chart for all

students

has the most significant percentage of

this

sector

, 67%. Interestingly,

this

sector

is negligible for the other two charts, 5% and 1% for

PhD

students

and junior

lecturers

, respectively. The

last

sector

is reading 6 to 11

books

per

week

. With three-quarters of all individuals, junior

lecturers

were placed at the top in terms of reading 6 to 11

books

per

week

, and for all

students

chart, it was 21%. With 15% of individuals who read 6 to 11

books

per

week

PhD

students

were placed

at the end

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