The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
The charts make
comparison
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comparisons
about
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between
variety
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the variety
sorts
and locations of Change preposition
of sorts
dance
classes which are being taken by young
generation in Australia.
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the young
Overall
, there are five different places and three types of dance
activities.
To begin
with, while
most
renowned place for Correct article usage
the most
dance
is Private
studio which is chosen by 48% of participants, Correct article usage
a Private
Collage-based
studios showed the Correct your spelling
College-based
less
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lowest
result
with 10%. Fix the agreement mistake
results
Moreover
, there is
School halls Change the verb form
are
which
24% of people take Change preposition
in which
dance
lessons in
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apply
it
after school assignments. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Furthermore
, 18% of participants prefer community halls and other facilities.
Nearly 600 students who are under 11 years old most
preferred ballet. Correct quantifier usage
apply
Less
popular option among them is modern Rephrase
The least
dance
which is adored by 300 of them. Tap exercises liked
better by nearly 500 of them.The most common Add a missing verb
were liked
dance
type among 11
-16 age group is modern with Correct article usage
the 11
bit
more Correct article usage
a bit
500
, Change preposition
than 500
while
ballet preferred
by only 300, and tap activity were interested Add a missing verb
was preferred
by
more than 400 of them.Change the preposition
in
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