The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
The pie chart gives data on where
dance
classes
was
attended and the bar chart illustrates what types of Change the verb form
were
dance
classes
were taken
place by two categories of age Wrong verb form
took
group
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groups
in
particular
city Add an article
a particular
of
Australia.
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Overall
, the most of dance
classes
were in private studios. In terms of types of classes
, ballet was the most popular in age
group under 11, Add an article
the age
whereas
modern dance
classes
were mostly taken by children who were 11-16 years old.
The highest proportion of dancers was shown in private studiousSubmitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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