Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, human beings are living in a digital civilization. Everything is almost automated to limit human labour. All thanks to the efforts and dedication of talented people. How do they can create those fascinating inventions? Is it

competition

for individuals to become superior or is it thanks to solidarity in coming up with a

solution

?

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is the reason many people argue that

competition

at

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workplace

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, at school, and even in daily life is a good thing.

However

, others claim that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. In my opinion,

competition

is the necessity of each individual’s growing path. First of all, humans are individuals who always live in a community together, they influence each other.

For instance

, if he finds he is not good at

this

aspect like others do, he will try to research, learn more, and even ask for help to improve his field.

This

one could be called the motive power for one person to grow up day by day.

Secondly

, we sometimes go on many roads which do not have any

teammate

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or

mentor

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, the only thing we need to do at that time is walk on our own feet. We have to find a

solution

to achieve achievements for ourselves. After your efforts, your hard work, you will find yourself stronger, more confident, and more experienced. Those are

ones

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of

good

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things that

competition

among people in many aspects gave back.

On the other hand

, we can not deny that cooperation

also

plays a significant role in our

life

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. Working together could be more productive because everyone gives their opinion to contribute to the work.

Besides

, we would

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team-working

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skills through cooperating.

Last

but not least, both statements

also

have their own good

as well as

negative sides. My own view on the matter is that we should observe to choose for ourselves the suitable

solution

for each circumstance.

Competition

is necessary for a society to develop, and cooperation is a good

solution

to make projects more objective.