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The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the annual
GDP
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growth
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 of three nations from 2007 to 2010.
Overall
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, the
GDP
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 of Tunisia was at the top in the starting period but in the ending period, Japan’s
GDP
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 made a significant place in all three countries. The
GDP
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 rate of each country changed every
year
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 and made a specific
growth
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, Ecuador was the only exception. In 2007, Tunisia’s
GDP
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 was higher than the other two countries,
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 as more than 6%.
This
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 number decreased by 33% in the next
year
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while
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 Japan’s
GDP
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 grew by 200% compared to
last
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year
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. In the next two years, in 2009 and 2010, the
GDP
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growth
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 of Tunisia decreased by 25% and was stable at 3% in both years. The
GDP
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growth
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 of Ecuador fluctuated in all four years, 5% was the top
growth
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 of that country in 2008 and the least was more than 1% in 2009. The
GDP
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 of Japan made significant
growth
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 each
year
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, starting from 2% in 2007 and
at the end
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 of the period, it was 6.5%

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp, growth, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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