Write IELTS essay task 1 with at least 150 words with the topic "The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant."
The presented diagram provides information regarding how many steps are involved in order to
water
cycle
, which contains water
movements above and under the ground.
Overall
, there are four steps in the water
cycle
which start with the evaporation of water
ocean
and ends with pouring the water
back into the ocean
and this
cycle
is repeated.
Firstly
, with the sun's rays on the ocean
waters evaporate and around 80% of this
water
vapour is in the air, next water
vapour condenses to the clouds and moves to the mountains and valley areas. After that, these formed clouds start to precipitation on the Earth.
Some rains convert to snow on top of the mountain peaks and another gater to lakes. Subsequently
, some of these rains in terms of surface runoff and groundwater flow down to the ocean
. Finally
, water
's ocean
because of the sun's heating converts to vapour again and this
cycle
will be repeated over timeSubmitted by Behnaz_rashidian on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, cycle, ocean with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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