The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when relevant
The diagram illustrated below depicts the process of production of
electricity
using geothermal energy.
The process consists of five major steps, starting from the pumping of cold Use synonyms
water
, and ending with the generation of Use synonyms
electricity
.
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Firstly
, cold Linking Words
water
is pumped down to the geothermal zone via underground pipes, which comprise hot rocks. once the Use synonyms
water
reaches the rocks, the Use synonyms
water
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heated to a boiling point after which it is sent to production well.
From there, Linking Words
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is transported back to the surface through vents. Later, the hot Use synonyms
water
undergoes a process called condensation in the condenser. The condenser produces steam, which is delivered to turbines, which are powered by steam. Use synonyms
then
, the steam spins the turbines, in turn turning on the generator.
the generator which is powered by turbines, generates Linking Words
electricity
.
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Finally
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is Use synonyms
then
transferred to a transmission tower from where the current Linking Words
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sent to local power stations, which supply power to industrial and domestic zones.Correct your spelling
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