The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offense (crime). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.
The given column bar chart illustrates the
amount
of males and females that got arrested Change the quantifier
number
by
a type of Change preposition
for
offense
, Change the spelling
offence
It is clear that
the proportion of crime
involved in violence against a person for both genders is the highest compared to other types of crime
.
According to
the diagram, the lowest illegal action for women is Robbery with approximately 3%,whereas
the least criminal offense
for men is fraud and forgery which has a rate of 4%.
Change the spelling
offence
Secondly
, the second most committed crime
for men was Theft
and handling stolen goods with a percentage of about 21%,Nonetheless
, females a
have a higher percentage of Correct article usage
apply
crime
committed with Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
Theft
and handling stolen goods, as shown in the graph, both Violence and Theft
on handling stolen goods have a rate of more than 30% for women.
Overall
, Violence is the highest offense
rate for both genders, Change the spelling
offence
also
Theft
is the second most popular crime
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