The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offense (crime). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offense (crime). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given column bar chart illustrates the
amount
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number
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of males and females that got arrested
by
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for
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a type of
offense
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offence
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,
It is clear that
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the proportion of
crime
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involved in violence against a person for both genders is the highest compared to other types of
crime
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.
According to
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the diagram, the lowest illegal action for women is Robbery with approximately 3%,
whereas
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the least criminal
offense
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offence
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for men is fraud and forgery which has a rate of 4%.
Secondly
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, the second most committed
crime
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for men was
Theft
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and handling stolen goods with a percentage of about 21%,
Nonetheless
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, females
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have a higher percentage of
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crime
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crimes
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committed with
Theft
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and handling stolen goods, as shown in the graph, both Violence and
Theft
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on handling stolen goods have a rate of more than 30% for women.
Overall
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, Violence is the highest
offense
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offence
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rate for both genders,
also
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Theft
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is the second most popular
crime
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.
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