The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offense (crime). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offense (crime). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.
The given column bar chart illustrates the
amount
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number
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of males and females that got arrested
by
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for
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a type of
offense
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offence
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,
It is clear that
the proportion of
crime
involved in violence against a person for both genders is the highest compared to other types of
crime
.
According to
the diagram, the lowest illegal action for women is Robbery with approximately 3%,
whereas
the least criminal
offense
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offence
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for men is fraud and forgery which has a rate of 4%.
Secondly
, the second most committed
crime
for men was
Theft
and handling stolen goods with a percentage of about 21%,
Nonetheless
, females
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have a higher percentage of
crime
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crimes
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committed with
Theft
and handling stolen goods, as shown in the graph, both Violence and
Theft
on handling stolen goods have a rate of more than 30% for women.
Overall
, Violence is the highest
offense
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offence
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rate for both genders,
also
Theft
is the second most popular
crime
.
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