THE CHARTS SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF PEOPLE WORKING INDIFFERENT SECTORS IN TOWNS A AND B IN TWO YEARS, 1960 AND 2010
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of residents working in separate sectors in towns A and B from 1960 to 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
the percentage of individuals labouring in manufacturing and sales
in town
A decreased while
the figure for services increased. Additionally
, town
B witnessed a drop in the rate of people working in manufacturing but the figure for services and sales
grew.
To begin
, town
A witnessed 29% of the workforce working in manufacturing in 1960, after that, it grew significantly to 64% in 2010 whereas
the proportion of labour working in sales
and manufacturing experienced significant declines from 30% and 41% in 1960 to 16% and 20% in 2010, respectively.
On the other hand
, the proportion of people labouring in manufacturing in town
B fell from 70% in 1960 to 58% in 2010; however
, the figure for labour working in sales
and services climbed from 20% and 10% in 1960 to 22% and 25% in 2011, respectively.Submitted by writingeilts on
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