The pie charts below show the online shopping sales of retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 TASK 1
The pie charts give the information rate about the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in the years 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, Online shopping at the beginning showed higher in the travel and lower in the book’s ratio at the end
. In contrast
, sales of films and music proportions contributed the largest
to the sectors Correct word choice
most
while
clothes were the smallest percentage at the end
of the period.
In 2003, The books and films/music deal in the nation was the least significant portion at 19% and 21% respectively. However
, this
trade became the third and second leading growth in the year 2013 at 22% and 33%.
In contrast
, After a decade marketing reversal happened dramatically. Travel and clothes made up the largest involvement part of purchases in 2003 about 36% and 24%. In the meantime, the selling trend dropped over the 10-year period to about 16% and 29% appropriately.Submitted by kiruthikakannan.pid on
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