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Many goods including what we use on daily basis produced by other countries need to be transported from a long distance.To what extent Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages

#goods #basis #countries #distance
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manufacturing
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process
, delivery
product
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 from the production site to the market is challenging, especially when the goods need to be transported across
countries
.
However
,
this
process
 is essential since not every country could
fullfill
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fulfil
 their needs and should
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 on the other
countries
. Exporting products to other
coutries
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countries
 could benefit
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the country's income or GDP (gross domestic product). As an indicator
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nation
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 growth, increasing GDP will generate prosperity
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 the nation and ultimately
to
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 the citizens. On the other side, importing products from other
countries
 will satisfy the
consuments
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consumers
, particularly for the things that are insufficiently produced within the country.
Therefore
, the activity of importing and exporting
stuffs
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accross
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across
countries
 is actually a mutual
process
 that not only
benefited
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for
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the market
,
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 but
also
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 the relationship between
countries
.
Although
 the
process
 of import and export will help the daily needs between
countries
, knowing the limit is necessary to prevent negative impacts.
For instance
, excessive
import
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 will eventually prevent the growth of local products.
In contrast
, too much export, especially natural
prouduct
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product
products
 could deplete the
coutry's
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country's
 resources.
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task achievement
While the essay addresses the topic and provides valid points, try to include more relevant and varied specific examples to strengthen your arguments. This will make your essay more convincing and comprehensively cover the topic.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to include a clear and concise conclusion that summarizes your main points. This will help reinforce your argument and improve your overall essay structure.
coherence cohesion
There's a need for better connection between sentences and paragraphs. Utilize linking words and phrases to improve transitions and make your essay flow more smoothly.
coherence cohesion
You have a clear and understandable introduction that sets up the topic well.
task achievement
Your essay addresses both sides of the argument, showing a balanced view of the issue.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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