The maps illustrate the changes in the Local Museum at the north-east corner of Hartford Street and Redcliff Street in three separate years: 1957, 1987, 2007.
The present maps demonstrate information about the alternative in the Local
Museum
at the north-east corner of Hartford Street and Redcliff Street in 2 different years( 1957 and 2007).
It is obvious, unfortunately, that this
kind of development had a bad effect on the vegetation area, but the museum
facilities were increasing.
According to
the pictures, initially
, in 1957, we can see the museum
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museum's
surrounding
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surroundings
was
full of threes, and in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
centre
of the zone we had a small Correct article usage
the centre
place
with a special road; however
, in 2007, most of the trees were destroyed; as a result
, the garden becomes smaller than past, yet in 2007 museum
place
had evolved, and car park instead
of the garden which was next to the road.
The museum
building in 2007, was bigger than in1957. Moreover
, the section of the place
was not only raised but also
altered. In other words
, in 2007 the entrance opened in the museum
shop at the right of the structure; then
it added a reception, Cafe, and education centre
the place
. In addition
, the local history room which was in centre
replaced by a national history exhibition; Correct article usage
the centre
furthermore
, we can see a particular exhibition next to the education centre
in the north of the buildingSubmitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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