The maps illustrate the changes in the Local Museum at the north-east corner of Hartford Street and Redcliff Street in three separate years: 1957, 1987, 2007.
The present maps demonstrate information about the alternative in the Local
Museum
at the north-east corner of Hartford Street and Redcliff Street in 2 different years( 1957 and 2007).
It is obvious, unfortunately, that Use synonyms
this
kind of development had a bad effect on the vegetation area, but the Linking Words
museum
facilities were increasing.
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initially
, in 1957, we can see the Linking Words
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museum
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museum's
surrounding
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surroundings
was
full of threes, and in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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centre
of the zone we had a small Correct article usage
the centre
place
with a special road; Use synonyms
however
, in 2007, most of the trees were destroyed; Linking Words
as a result
, the garden becomes smaller than past, yet in 2007 Linking Words
museum
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place
had evolved, and car park Use synonyms
instead
of the garden which was next to the road.
The Linking Words
museum
building in 2007, was bigger than in1957. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the section of the Linking Words
place
was not only raised but Use synonyms
also
altered. Linking Words
In other words
, in 2007 the entrance opened in the Linking Words
museum
shop at the right of the structure; Use synonyms
then
it added a reception, Cafe, and education Linking Words
centre
the Use synonyms
place
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the local history room which was in Linking Words
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centre
replaced by a national history exhibition; Correct article usage
the centre
furthermore
, we can see a particular exhibition next to the education Linking Words
centre
in the north of the buildingUse synonyms
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