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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago, and how it appears now. Summarize the information, report the main features, and make comparisons wherever relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago, and how it appears now. Summarize the information, report the main features, and make comparisons wherever relevant.
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The diagrams compare the plan of a public
library
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 between 20 years ago and the present.
Overall
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, the
library
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 has experienced significant changes, and new facilities have been developed. In the 20 years ago, there were tables and chairs in the middle of the
library
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. On the left side, there were two rooms for reading and CDs, videos, and
computer
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 games respectively. Adult fiction
books
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 could be found between the reading
room
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 and CDs, videos, and
computer
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 games
room
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. In the bottom
right
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 corner, visitors could ask for tickets and book returns at an enquiry desk. Above the desk, there were adult non-fiction
books
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. In the top
right
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 corner, children's
books
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 were placed. At present, the
library
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 has been altered in many areas.
Firstly
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, the tables and chairs have disappeared, and the reading
room
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 has been changed to the
computer
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room
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. Adult fiction
books
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 have been relocated to the
right
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 side of the
library
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. The enquiry desk has been removed and a cafe has been constructed in the area.
As a consequence
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, people should use self-service machines to return
books
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. The
room
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 for CDs, videos, and
computer
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 games has been converted to children's fiction
books
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.
In addition
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, in the top
right
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 corner, a lecture
room
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 has replaced the children's
books
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, computer, books, room, right with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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