The two tables below show statistics of workers of foreign and US birth in the United States last year. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables given give information about statistics of foreign and US people workers in the United States
last
year. Overall
, the US birth workforce is extremely higher than the foreign workforce. Age
between 45 to 54 is the highest age
of foreign get employed however
, it is between 35 to 44 for US birth.
Firstly
, by gender men are more employed than women for both foreign and United States birth. Nevertheless
, the number of female and male foreigns that they
don't get Correct pronoun usage
apply
job
is 2,388 and the Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
US
people is 12,438.
Correct quantifier usage
number of US
Secondly
, by age
foreign and US humans are less employed at Add a comma
age,
age
65 and plus.Submitted by ryalhamdan on
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