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The charts Below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.

The charts Below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.
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The given charts show shows the percentage of
water
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 used for different purposes in six areas of the world,
it is clear that
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 the most
water
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 used in North America is for industrial
use
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.
According to
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 the graph, there are four areas that
use
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water
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 mostly for Agriculture, these areas are: South America, Africa, Central America and South East Asia,
Whereas
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 two places rely on
water
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 for industry.
Secondly
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, Domestic
use
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 had the lowest percentage of
water
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use
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 generally

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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