SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT HAVING A SET RETIREMENT AGE (Example 65 YEARS) FOR EVERYBODY, REGARDLESS OF OCCUPATION, IS UNFAIR. THEY BELIEVE THAT A CERTAIN WORKERS DESERVE TO RETIRE AND RECEIVE A PENSION AT AN EARLIER AGE. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? WHICH TYPE OF WORKERS DO YOU THINK SHOULD BENEFIT FROM EARLY RETIREMENT?

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statement refers to

employee’s

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minimum

retirement

age

have been fixed by the authorities at around 65 years and

this

rule

for

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all types of

job

categories. Some people argued that these rules will not match to

such

employees

and they are eligible to get a pension fund at an earlier

age

. I strongly agree with the statement by giving the below-mentioned points.

Firstly

, most of the countries’ governments have implemented a law for

employees

who are working in government sectors their minimum average

retirement

age

is between 60 to 65 years.

Moreover

, after the completion of a full period

service

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only they will become eligible to get a pension amount monthly basis. These

type

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of rules will not suit

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some

employees

such

as those who are working in the nuclear sector, chemical industries and some physical works which are

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potentially harmful to the

employees

’ health. To illustrate, in my country, the average

retirement

age

for public sector

employees

have

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around 60 years.

Thus

, most of the

employees

who are physically ill get more suffered during their service period.

Furthermore

, all nations’ governments should consider their

employees

’ minimum

age

limit and endeavour to ease the rules.

However

,

employees

who are working in

defence

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department and public transport sections

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retire earlier, because that field contains a lot of physical work

also

the

job

is risky

at

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sometimes.

Due to

this

early

retirement

will be safer for them

also

, if they retire early

age

, most of the teenagers will possibly

to

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get a

job

in that field.

To conclude

,

retirement

at an early

age

for some kind of

job

is a good legislation.

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, it will

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to

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a

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new

job

opportunity

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opportunities

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among

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youngster

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.