The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart compares the percentage of

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divorces that have taken place in

Finland

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and

Sweden

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during the five years commencing from 2011

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,

while

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Finland

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experienced

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upward trend, that of

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Sweden

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was

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a downward pattern despite

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the fluctuations.

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,

Finland

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which had the

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lowest

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rate at the beginning,has surpassed

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at the end

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. It is conspicuous that, the rate of

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which started at a level of just below 40% in 2011, has reported a dip

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just above 30% in the next year.

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witnessed a gradual increment till 2014 and remained still at its maximum

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of approximately 40% in the final two years of 2014 and 2015. Probing ahead,

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about 45%

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Sweden

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of Sweden

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couples

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separated in 2011, it had the peak value in the consecutive year,accounted 50%.

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, it depicted a steady

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during the next two couples of years and by the end of 2015

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has

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reduced

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divorce cases by almost 15%

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from

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its zenith

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2012.