The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the total expenditure on junk foods namely hamburgers, fish and chips, and pizzas over the 20-year
period
starting from 1970.
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Overall
, we can see the number of fish and chips and hamburgers saw an upward trend Linking Words
while
pizza , Linking Words
in contrast
, downward trend.
In 1970, the hamburger was nearly 30 Linking Words
grains
at first but it increased gradually to over 100 Use synonyms
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in 1985, Use synonyms
then
went up dramatically to nearly 300 Linking Words
grains
to finish the whole Use synonyms
period
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the fish and chips had the same pattern. It was 90 Linking Words
grains
at the first of the Use synonyms
period
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then
moderately climbed to 150 Linking Words
grains
in 1980, Use synonyms
then
considerably to reached a peak of 500 Linking Words
grains
in 1990 to complete the Use synonyms
period
.
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By contrast
, in 1970 pizza witnessed a high rise at 300 Linking Words
grains
. After that, it noticeably declined to 200 in 1980 and continued to slowly fluctuate over the 10 years since 1980 and finished the whole Use synonyms
period
at approximately 200 Use synonyms
grains
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