The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the total expenditure on junk foods namely hamburgers, fish and chips, and pizzas over the 20-year
period
starting from 1970.
Overall
, we can see the number of fish and chips and hamburgers saw an upward trend while
pizza , in contrast
, downward trend.
In 1970, the hamburger was nearly 30 grains
at first but it increased gradually to over 100 grains
in 1985, then
went up dramatically to nearly 300 grains
to finish the whole period
. While
the fish and chips had the same pattern. It was 90 grains
at the first of the period
then
moderately climbed to 150 grains
in 1980, then
considerably to reached a peak of 500 grains
in 1990 to complete the period
.
By contrast
, in 1970 pizza witnessed a high rise at 300 grains
. After that, it noticeably declined to 200 in 1980 and continued to slowly fluctuate over the 10 years since 1980 and finished the whole period
at approximately 200 grains
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