The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph represents the consumed amount of junk cuisine in the United Kingdom per week from 1970 to 1990. it is measured in
grams
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the consumption of pizza started at 300 Linking Words
gm
in 1970 and declined to about 200 Use synonyms
grams
in fifteen years, in 1990 it slightly increased to 210 Use synonyms
gm
.
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on the other hand
, the other two fast foods ( Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
and hamburger ) Use synonyms
similarly
, became more trending than pizza in the period of time especially, Linking Words
fish
& Use synonyms
chips
.
In terms of, Use synonyms
fish
& Use synonyms
chips
and hamburgers upward trend in the Use synonyms
last
twenty-five years. Started at 80 Linking Words
grams
and 30 Use synonyms
gm
respectively, Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
rapidly grew to reach 500 Use synonyms
grams
in 1990. meanwhile, hamburger consumption reached almost 300gm in 1990. Use synonyms
Finally
, pizza become the less fast food consumption over the period of time given .Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, gm, fish, chips with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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