The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph represents the consumed amount of junk cuisine in the United Kingdom per week from 1970 to 1990. it is measured in
grams
.
Overall
, the consumption of pizza started at 300 gm
in 1970 and declined to about 200 grams
in fifteen years, in 1990 it slightly increased to 210 gm
.
on the other hand
, the other two fast foods ( fish
and chips
and hamburger ) similarly
, became more trending than pizza in the period of time especially, fish
& chips
.
In terms of, fish
& chips
and hamburgers upward trend in the last
twenty-five years. Started at 80 grams
and 30 gm
respectively, Nevertheless
, fish
and chips
rapidly grew to reach 500 grams
in 1990. meanwhile, hamburger consumption reached almost 300gm in 1990. Finally
, pizza become the less fast food consumption over the period of time given .Submitted by llaora on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, gm, fish, chips with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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