You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter ● introduce yourself ● describe your plans for the party ● invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. , You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Ms Allen,
My self John,
i
am your new neighbour. I have recently moved from California to Change the capitalization
I
this
city last
week. I am organizing an
small party Change the article
a
to
my home. I am writing Change preposition
at
an
letter to send you a warm invitation to join the party.
As Change the article
a
i
believe, everyone Change the capitalization
I
have
some free time Change the verb form
has
on
Change preposition
at
weekend
so, Add an article
the weekend
with
managing Change preposition
to
others
Change noun form
others'
other's
schedule
Correct subject-verb agreement
schedules
i
have decided to have Change the capitalization
I
party
on Saturday evening at 7.00pm. There are some of my closest friends and my family only. Add an article
a party
the party
However
, it is quite tedious for me at home as i
don't know anybody in Change the capitalization
I
neighbourhood
. Add an article
the neighbourhood
Although
, I will prepare some snacks, nachos and soft drinks will be served as well.
I would be delightfull
if you Correct your spelling
delightful
will
come with your family Wrong verb form
would
adn
even my kids Correct your spelling
and
will
enjoy Wrong verb form
would
with
your son too. So, we can know more about Add a missing verb
being with
eachother
. I am sure it won't be Correct your spelling
each other
longer
we will finish in Correct word choice
long
couple
of Change the article
a couple
hour
.
I hope you will accept my kind invitation.
Yours Change to a plural noun
hours
Fithfully
,
JohnCorrect your spelling
Faithfully
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grammar
Pay attention to grammatical issues and correct spelling mistakes like 'Myself', 'an small party', 'an letter', 'delightfull', and 'adn'.
sentence structure
Use clearer and more varied sentence structures to improve overall readability and flow of sentences.
task completion
The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task: introducing yourself, describing the plans for the party, and inviting the neighbour.
tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and respectful, which is appropriate for the context.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,