You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter ● introduce yourself ● describe your plans for the party ● invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. , You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Ms Allen, My self John,
i
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am your new neighbour. I have recently moved from California to
this
city
last
week. I am organizing
an
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small party
to
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my home. I am writing
an
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letter to send you a warm invitation to join the party. As
i
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believe, everyone
have
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some free time
on
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weekend
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so,
with
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managing
others
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schedule
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i
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have decided to have
party
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a party
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on Saturday evening at 7.00pm. There are some of my closest friends and my family only.
However
, it is quite tedious for me at home as
i
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don't know anybody in
neighbourhood
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.
Although
, I will prepare some snacks, nachos and soft drinks will be served as well. I would be
delightfull
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delightful
if you
will
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come with your family
adn
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and
even my kids
will
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enjoy
with
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your son too. So, we can know more about
eachother
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each other
. I am sure it won't be
longer
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we will finish in
couple
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of
hour
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. I hope you will accept my kind invitation. Yours
Fithfully
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Faithfully
, John
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grammar
Pay attention to grammatical issues and correct spelling mistakes like 'Myself', 'an small party', 'an letter', 'delightfull', and 'adn'.
sentence structure
Use clearer and more varied sentence structures to improve overall readability and flow of sentences.
task completion
The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task: introducing yourself, describing the plans for the party, and inviting the neighbour.
tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and respectful, which is appropriate for the context.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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