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The chart below shows the results of a survey that sampled a cross section of travelers at a major metropolitan airport about the purpose of their trip. The survey was carried out during four different months in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey that sampled a cross section of travelers at a major metropolitan airport about the purpose of their trip. The survey was carried out during four different months in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives information about the purpose of the people's trips which is three reasons ( business, holiday, visit family or other ), during different four months in 2002. the unit is measured in percentage.
Overall
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, in March 73% of the travellers travel on business trips,
then
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this
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 kind of travel become less in June 29%.
moreover
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, the number of people who go on family flights became significantly more compared between March to December. in terms of, holidays trips started in March at the lowest at 18%
then
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 reached 54%
due to
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 vacation maybe.
on the other hand
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, the visited relatives reason on June and September were almost similar, 13% and 11% respectively.
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 , in September and December the travellers on holiday cause 31% and 35% respectively, it's not a huge difference.

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