The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean islan between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean islan between 2010 and 2017. 

Summerise the information  by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.
The given graph shows the
number
of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean
island
between 2010 and 2017,
It is clear that
that
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apply
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the
year
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years
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2010 and 2011 had the lowest demand
of
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for
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visitors
staying on
island
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the island
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First of all, the
number
of
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
were
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was
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the
least
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lowest
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in both 2010 and 2012,
However
, 2017 had the highest
visitors
on
cruise
ships
in
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apply
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2017 with 2
million
,
Whereas
the lowest
number
of total
visitors
that stayed on
island
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the island
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and
cruise
ships
was in 2010 with 1
million
, and the highest was in 2017 which had 3.5
million
people.
Furthermore
, the largest difference between the
number
of pupils staying on
island
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the island
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and people being on
cruise
ships
is 2012 and 2013, both of the two years had a difference of 1
million
visitors
.
Overall
, the quantity of total tourists is increasing every year and didn't
had
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have
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a decrease in tourists.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, visitors, cruise, ships, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.

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