The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean islan between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.
The given graph shows the
number
of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island
between 2010 and 2017, It is clear that
that
the Correct word choice
apply
year
2010 and 2011 had the lowest demand Fix the agreement mistake
years
of
Change preposition
for
visitors
staying on island
First of all, the Add an article
the island
number
of visitors
staying on cruise
ships
were
the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
least
in both 2010 and 2012, Correct your spelling
lowest
However
, 2017 had the highest visitors
on cruise
ships
in
2017 with 2 Change preposition
apply
million
,Whereas
the lowest number
of total visitors
that stayed on island
and Correct article usage
the island
cruise
ships
was in 2010 with 1 million
, and the highest was in 2017 which had 3.5 million
people.
Furthermore
, the largest difference between the number
of pupils staying on island
and people being on Add an article
the island
cruise
ships
is 2012 and 2013, both of the two years had a difference of 1 million
visitors
.
Overall
, the quantity of total tourists is increasing every year and didn't had
a decrease in tourists.Change the verb form
have
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