The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean islan between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.
The given graph shows the
number
of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Use synonyms
island
between 2010 and 2017, Use synonyms
It is clear that
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that
the Correct word choice
apply
year
2010 and 2011 had the lowest demand Fix the agreement mistake
years
of
Change preposition
for
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
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island
First of all, the Add an article
the island
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
cruise
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ships
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were
the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
least
in both 2010 and 2012, Correct your spelling
lowest
However
, 2017 had the highest Linking Words
visitors
on Use synonyms
cruise
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ships
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in
2017 with 2 Change preposition
apply
million
,Use synonyms
Whereas
the lowest Linking Words
number
of total Use synonyms
visitors
that stayed on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
and Correct article usage
the island
cruise
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ships
was in 2010 with 1 Use synonyms
million
, and the highest was in 2017 which had 3.5 Use synonyms
million
people.
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Furthermore
, the largest difference between the Linking Words
number
of pupils staying on Use synonyms
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island
and people being on Add an article
the island
cruise
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ships
is 2012 and 2013, both of the two years had a difference of 1 Use synonyms
million
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visitors
.
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Overall
, the quantity of total tourists is increasing every year and didn't Linking Words
had
a decrease in tourists.Change the verb form
have
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, visitors, cruise, ships, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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