Some people think the news has no connection to people's lives, so then it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Some individuals argue that
news
it
is far away from Correct pronoun usage
apply
real-life
and Correct your spelling
real life
people
waste their time when they watch news
or read Add an article
the news
Add an article
the newspaper
a newspaper
newspaper
. Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
This
essay totally disagrees with this
statement because the news
keeps us informed about global and local events , and news
provide
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provides
curical
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crucial
weather
updated
and warnings that can affect daily activities and safety.
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updates
people
need to be aware about
what Change the preposition
of
happen
in the Wrong verb form
is happening
worlds
and Fix the agreement mistake
world
newspaper
and Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
news
programs help informed
them about everything. Change the form of the verb
inform
Moreover
, news
has a postive
impact Correct your spelling
positive
in
their life because if there is a war between different countries, Change preposition
on
people
will not go there and stay safe. For example
, when Isreal
attacked Correct your spelling
Israel
Gaza
many people
traveled
from Change the spelling
travelled
Gaza
, and other countries informed and they help
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helped
Gaza
by sending food and medications , also
they
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apply
follow
what Wrong verb form
followed
Gaza
's communities suffering and how many people
have been died there.
Additionaly
, Correct your spelling
Additionally
news
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the news
provide
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provides
weather
infomation
through Correct your spelling
information
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the forcast
forcast
and Correct your spelling
forecast
eveybody
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everybody
informed
about Add a missing verb
is informed
weather
if there is Add an article
the weather
storm
they will stay at home or if it is rainning they will take their umbrellas. Add an article
a storm
Furthermore
, before individuals travel to another nation , they will check weather
Correct article usage
the weather
news
and pick right
clothes. Correct article usage
the right
For example
, weather
in Dubia Correct article usage
the weather
very
hot and Add a missing verb
is very
everyone
Correct word choice
if everyone
want
to travel to a cold place Change the verb form
wants
and
they Correct word choice
apply
has
to use Change the verb form
have
weather
application.
In conclusion , Correct article usage
a weather
although
some persons
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people
thought
Wrong verb form
think
news
is wasting time , it is an
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apply
importent
to Correct your spelling
important
informed
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inform
commuities
about what Correct your spelling
communities
happend
in the world and how is the Correct your spelling
happened
weather
in different countries . It is predictied
that Correct your spelling
predicted
news
will become an
Correct article usage
apply
essintial
for everyone.Correct your spelling
essential
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task response
Try to improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Read your essay aloud to catch errors and awkward phrasing.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear, logical structure throughout the essay. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main point.
coherence cohesion
Use more transition words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly.
task response
You have provided relevant and specific examples to support your points, which strengthens your argument.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present and reasonably effective in stating your thesis and summarizing the main points.
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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