In many countries, truancy* is a serious problem for both parents and teachers. •What are the causes of truancy, and what may be the effects on the child and the wider community?

Nowadays, in several countries, skipping
school
is a concerning issue for teachers and parents.
This
essay will ,
firstly
,discuss the main causes of
truancy
, and
secondly
, predict common outcomes of
this
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. Despite that
truancy
as an act of violation has various reasons ,we will go through the most obvious ones .
Firstly
, the main cause of
students
’ absence during academic time might be abuse and bullying at
school
,
hence
,children don’t see any possible positive side
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the place where
he
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occurs
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to be an object of ridicule.
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, I had
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classmate who was endlessly humiliated by our teachers ,
due to
her low grades and her relationships at a very young age.
Secondly
, another possible reason for
students
to abandon
school
can be family circumstances ,
such
as divorce ,loss of
family
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, member, arguments
of
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parents
and
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etc. When offsprings constantly experience
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amount
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of stress in combination with social
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it always forces
students
to become truants.
As a result
of listed causes
students
, who are constantly skipping educational institutions most likely will get serious troubles in the future . Continuous
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of
truancy
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performed by a group of underage individuals ,
as a consequence
these groups spend their free time indulging their bad habits and hurting themselves.
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67% of underage Brazilian
students
,who skipped educational institutions, had cigarettes and alcohol addictions. Naturally
school
skippers cause difficulties not only for themselves
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but
also
for their families . In
this
case, families of delinquents suffer from financial issues and mental states
such
as burnout and anxiety . I
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example, have personally witnessed
this
happen with a few of my classmates,
due to
their escapes from
school
.
To conclude
everything ,
truancy
is an issue ,that often begins at
school
with teachers and classmates, becoming
a triggers
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for victimized children.
This
means that teenager do not look at fleeing from educational
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seriously and they do not take into their consideration how lack of academic knowledge might confine and hinder their lives . It is
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crucial
crucal
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crucial
to instill critical thinking at an early age to help young minds to have
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perception of life and identify what is good and what is not
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