In many countries, truancy* is a worrying issue for both parents and educators. •What are the causes of truancy, and what may be the effects on the child and the wider community?
Truancy is a huge problem and threat for both parents and teachers. There could
me
many reasons why students like Correct your spelling
be
this
action. However
, they might do this
because they don't like the lessons or teachers or have an exact and reasonable cause.
First things first,
children can skip lessons because they are not into
the class or they dislike a teacher. Some children who like maths may not like literature. Change preposition
in
And it
Correct word choice
It
also
may be caused by toxic teachers who will try to fail students or just not respecting
them. Wrong verb form
respect
For instance
, in Ghana, one informatics teacher was so determined to teach his kids, so
that he drew Correct word choice
apply
whole
computer on the blackboard to make them ready if they ever get in front of the real computer. From his words, literally not any student missed his class except for some serious reasons.
Second things Change the article
the whole
second,
they could be in some trouble without letting their parents know. There could me
some causes from which young people miss their classesCorrect your spelling
be
out
. Change preposition
apply
For example
, someone's best friend could be in hospital
or someone could be traumatized and they visit some psychologists. I know, it may sound weird. But Gen Z Add an article
a hospital
the hospital
more
likely Add a missing verb
is more
does
some things without letting their parents know.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
to do
this
issue is considered to be extremely dangerous. However
, I would like to recommend to pay
more attention to children and Change the verb form
paying
don't
Verb problem
not
be
toxic towards them. I believeWrong verb form
being
,
these actions will Remove the comma
apply
Correct your spelling
decrease
decrase
the statistics of truancy a lot and eventually, fix the issueCorrect your spelling
decrease
Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
coherence cohesion
To achieve a higher score in coherence and cohesion, aim to refine the logical flow between your ideas and paragraphs. Use more cohesive devices and transitional phrases to ensure smooth transitions between your points.
task achievement
For task achievement, make sure you delve deeper into the causes and effects of truancy, providing a more comprehensive response with varied reasons and consequences. Moreover, try to provide specific, compelling examples to illustrate your points more effectively.
task achievement
Although your ideas are clear, expanding them with more depth and clarity would improve your essay. Aim to thoroughly explore each point and support it with varied and relevant examples.
introduction conclusion present
Your introduction sets the stage for discussing the issue of truancy effectively, and your conclusion wraps up the essay nicely, emphasizing the importance of addressing this problem.
relevant specific examples
You offer some relevant examples, like the teacher in Ghana, which add context and interest to your points.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?